Wednesday, March 10, 2010

In life, we all have many obstacles to overcome. For example, a young boy really wants to make the basketball team, even though he is not that athletic. He has always wanted to learn the complex rules and plays of the game. He knows there are many kids trying out who are better than he is at basketball. So he practices every day, and tries and tries to get better and make the team. He puts all of his effort into his practices. When the tryouts finally come he makes some great plays and is proud of his accomplishments. The other kids trying out are aggressive and make even better plays. The boy ends up not making the team, but he is still proud and satisfied because he put all his efforts into trying out for the team. The boy knows that he tried his best, and was able to learn the game of basketball. He is happy with his strength and persistence when competing with the others.

In the old man and the sea, Santiago must overcome many obstacles, but perseveres through them all. "His hope and confidence had never gone." (p.13) This quote shows how Santiago is strong. Santiago is putting every ounce of effort into catching fish, although he hasn't caught any fish for 84 days. He still perseveres to catch fish even though his chances look somber. The boy trying out for the basketball team also has a very dismal chance of making the team, but still perseveres. Both Santiago and the boy going for the spot on the basketball team are very audacious to defeat and optimistic.

Santiago is tireless in his efforts. He continuously tries to catch the Marlin. Even when his body tires he doesn't give up. " cramp then if you want, make yourself into a claw. It will do no good" (58) Once he has accomplished reeling in the great fish his obstacles don't end there. As he tries to bring his fish home the sharks start to attack the Marlin. Just as the boy trying out for the basketball team has to face the aggression of the other athletes on the court, Santiago must face the aggression of the sharks in the sea. "They must have taken a quarter of him and of the best meat" he said aloud (110).

When Santiago arrives home there is nothing left of the marlin but its skeleton. Instead of Santiago feeling poignant, he feels proud. He realizes that while he may not have brought the fish home to make money and prove to others he caught it, he proved to himself that he could accomplish the goal he had set out to do. Santiago managed to obtain his goal with effort and resolve. "He hit it without hope but with resolution and complete malignancy"(102).

In life there are many obstacles people encounter. Like Santiago, the boy trying out for the basketball team has multiple hurdles to overcome. He is less athletic than his peers, he is still learning the game, and he has aggressive competitors. He doesn't make the team, but he has pride in the effort he put into his try out. He is left with a greater understanding of the game and an improved ability to play. Santiago's obstacles are many as well; The demure size of his boat, the large size of the fish, and the aggression of the sharks toward the dead Marlin. Santiago brings home the fish, but not as a whole, as a skeleton. Santiago is proud that he knows he accomplished what he had set out to do. He caught the great fish! Both the boy trying out for basketball and Santiago proved to themselves they could accomplish their goals with persistence and pride. People face obstacles in everyday life. Conquering hurdles can be difficult, but with belief, effort, and perseverance, obstacles can be overcome.


1 comment:

  1. 1. Bobby's thesis is that in life we come across obsticles that we must overcome to survive ane live. I totally agree with this thesis, because life does give us challenges that we must overcome.
    2.There was only one quote so that was the best. it was the best because it was the only one that he put up.
    3. One strength that bobby's essay has is that it is somewhat organized. It has different examples to support his main point and thesis.
    4.something he has to work on is adding more quotes. there is only one and he has to give more to add to the 25% analysis of the essay.

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