Wednesday, October 14, 2009

The Bass of Lake Spofford

In life, people find that there are mental effects an item has as well as Physical effects. Things that we have everyday can be our most prized possession. Our minds eye see these things as if there worth vast amounts of money. In many ways, those things in life that don’t have any value are the most valuable things a person can have. In many other ways, those things that have value can be valuable to us, but not in the ways people believe.
One item that I value in life is my Bass. My Bass shows how I can express what I believe through the different elements of music. It is a Rickenbocker 4003 bass, with two pickups, mono and stereo outputs, and a really great truss rod design. It is worth $1600. That is not the reason I love this bass. It just feels right to play it. The way I run my fingers along the surface of the strings, it makes my fingers blister and calices. I don’t feel any pain. I just feel the body of the bass in my fingers. The bass came to me from my uncle, who got it from his brother, who paid $800 for it from some crazy Rush fan who carved his name and social security number into the pickup plate. The bass came with an amplifier, a few chords, a strap, and a hard case. Every little trait about this bass is great. The strings, which have been on there for twenty or so years, are still in great condition. I had one string break in my three years of having this bass, but it was easy fixing. When I got the replacement strings, I saw a Hofner bass, (Paul McCartney is a well known user of it) and I asked the store manager to play it, but when it was placed in my hands, I didn’t feel the warmth I felt with my Rickenbocker. The Hofner was too light, small, and perfectly shaped. I can’t put another bass in my hand without missing the Rickenbocker that came from Alex Higgins, 019-….
In my life, I have gone to Spofford Lake in New Hampshire every summer. One moment in those fifteen years that really stuck out to me was on the Fourth of July (2007), when we all go out in the boat parade and throw water balloons and shoot water guns at other boats. We went in our cousins’ boat this particular year, and they have a ski tower on which he cleverly set up two catapults for water balloons, and we dominated. We had a great time, in the process nailing a bunch of annoying college kids who tried to flip our smaller boat last year. We took on the guys who use fire hoses, hitting quite a few people in the process. Afterwards, we went to our cousins’ house and had dinner, and we hung out all night, playing games, Rock Band, and just having fun. The times we have up at the lake are really important to me, because there are so many things I can do up there. I feel like I am free up there, with no worries or concerns, and time is not a matter to me.
My bass has also been involved at my lake house. This past summer one of the most fun times of my life occurred with my bass at my lake house. In mid July, we decided to play as two bands for a day. We played five set lists. I played in every song. We set up large amplifiers on our patch of beach on the right side of the lawn, two PA speakers on the edge, we took two old docks, connected them, and placed drums and the PA control on them, and we put wood on the beach to keep our shoes from spreading sand into the foot pedals. The bass amp is right behind me, and as I play, I feel the smooth, heavy rhythm of the bass combining with the warm summer sun and the lakes cool breeze against my body, and everything feels alright. It was one of the greatest feelings in the world.
I value both my bass and my time at my lake house. They both reflect the kind of person I am. I like being with the people I love to be with at my lake house, which is separate from cities and businesses, and just to separate myself from the world and go to the rhythm of the music thundering through my ears. As much as I value solitude and peace of mind, when it becomes too much, it is more a sin than a virtue. So I even though I cannot have this feeling whenever I want, I believe that the separation from this feeling greatens my value for it, because it is an award for time spent without the feeling of playing the Rickenbocker bass or being at my lake house in the summer.

3 comments:

  1. Well Bobby seems to value both his time at his lake house and his bass a whole lot. As far as wich he values more this is not clear. I think he values them both equaly. But like he says they have to be in moderation.

    the thing that is most desribed is the time at his lake house. He says that it provides him with peace and seperation from the world wich is always good. He talks about how both are related in that they both bring him joy. I especialy like the part about him playing music at his lake house. I thought it was very well described.

    One of the essays overall strenghts was the descriptive power. He seems to describe both things in detail. I also enjoyed the inroduction. It was very good and it intrigued me and made me want to read.

    One thing that may improve bobbys essay is the word choice. He describes things good and dandy but he could use better words to do so.Overall I thought that this was a very good essay.

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  2. I think what he is trying to say is that it is more peaceful if you separate your self from the same boring routine you do everyday and to just surround yourself with the things and people you love. What he values the most is his rickenbocker bass and the time he spends with his loved ones at his lake house. These are the two thing bobby values and why he values them.

    I think he described his Rickenbocker bass guitar vividly because he really got down to the exact details and he made me feel like i was the one holding the guitar in my hands and that i was the one who was describing it. Although i did think it was a little akward that someone would have the desire to carve their social security number into a bass guitar that they weren't keeping.

    I think one this essay's strengths is the writing style. The author has a very unique way of describing his object/moment. In a way it almost feels like your have a little conversation with the author himself. It feels like he's only talking to you and you only.This is one of the reasons why i liked this essay a lot.

    One piece of advice I would give him is to strengthen his introduction and his conclusion. Those are key factors to his essay and frankly they are a little week but the descriptions were very good. If he just improved his introduction and conclusion i'm sure it would be a very good essay.

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  3. 1. What Bob is saying about value is that we both value things that are priced and priceless. We value things that are priced because they must mean something to us if we spend money on them. But also we cherish the moments we remember forever.
    2. I think that Bob describes his lake house the best. Because he gives a lot of detail explaining how fun it is. Also bob tells it is a place to relax. "I feel like I am free up there, with no worries or concerns, and time is not a matter to me."
    3. In general i think there are a few things that bob did well on. First he had a good introduction that really got me interested in his story. Also his writing was descriptive and what he said made me want to read more. Like when he said when he got his bass the previous owner carved their name and social security number into the plate.
    4. I think you did a fantastic job on your essay bobby and there is nothing much from what i can see that needs to be improved. But if i had to say something i guess i would agree with alec and say to use more descriptive words.

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